By writerflaw - 10/03/2015 17:36 - United States - Juneau

Today, I lost a grade on an essay, because according to my teacher, I put much more detail into my analytical essay than I should have. FML
I agree, your life sucks 33 821
You deserved it 3 435

Same thing different taste

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Honestly you need to talk to someone about that because you don't want to end up with a crappy grade because your teachers an idiot.

I am saddened by the American school system.

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And to think I get lowered for not expanding on things that should be obvious to anyone with a brain.

A lot of people said to complain to the teacher or principal. Curiously, I don't think that anyone has suggested to go to the teacher and ask if you can rewrite part of it to earn back some of the points.

why is everyone jumping the gun? i know in my school we have strict assessment objectives, and if your essay becomes waffly you lose marks. they have to be clear, concise and well structured. maybe you just need to check out what you actually have to do better next time.

Isa_fml 20

There's such a thing as too much detail. Concision is important.

I don't get how people like that function. "You did what you were supposed to, but you did it TOO well, so I'm punishing you for it."

Sometimes there's too much detail that your point gets lost and the paper drones on and on.

It can make it a bit unnecessarily lengthy at times

Why are there so many Ydi? Why did he deserved it? xD

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torin atk 2