What?

By Super Confused - 02/05/2016 23:59 - United States - Fremont

Today, I got my graded essay from my teacher. Earlier, he'd said that it was "too specific", and that I should change it to be "more general and debatable". Now that I've got it back, the first comments on the paper are, "Your thesis is too general, be more specific." FML
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Same thing different taste

Underfunded and underappreciated

By lrn2spel, teach - This FML is from back in 2013 but it's good stuff - United States - Mogadore

Today, I got back the essay I wrote about how my country's education system is fucked. At one point, I made a spelling mistake. My teacher wrote a note about it, basically calling me illiterate, and telling me to pay attention in school instead of whining about it. She misspelled "school". FML
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Thesis' are incredibly difficult to master.. While your teacher didn't give you great guidance, he did show you the general gist of what you should avoid when writing one - i.e. - being too specific or not specific enough... A thesis balances in between both. Don't discourage yourself though! With practice, I'm sure you'll turn into a pro

There could have been the possibility of making it too general? Ask around for people you trust to check your work next time. Either way, it sucks :/ fyl op.

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Hope you kept the first graded copy to raise a grievance

This is school in a nutshell not even kidding

Go with your gut. It may be wrong sometimes, but at least it's your mistake and you can own it.

thats how my composition professor was at my first college

deserved it. should have listened.

Yeah as other said, maybe you over corrected too far. You'll get better at it eventually

upandover 15

You gotta find that happy medium my friend.

The glory of the public school system

I would show them both comments on the essays and scream "WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM ME‽" like a madman.