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By Anonymous - 28/02/2017 04:00
Hope you kept the first graded copy to raise a grievance
This is school in a nutshell not even kidding
Go with your gut. It may be wrong sometimes, but at least it's your mistake and you can own it.
thats how my composition professor was at my first college
deserved it. should have listened.
Meet him In the middle
Yeah as other said, maybe you over corrected too far. You'll get better at it eventually
The glory of the public school system
I would show them both comments on the essays and scream "WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM ME‽" like a madman.
Keywords
Thesis' are incredibly difficult to master.. While your teacher didn't give you great guidance, he did show you the general gist of what you should avoid when writing one - i.e. - being too specific or not specific enough... A thesis balances in between both. Don't discourage yourself though! With practice, I'm sure you'll turn into a pro
There could have been the possibility of making it too general? Ask around for people you trust to check your work next time. Either way, it sucks :/ fyl op.