What?

By Super Confused - 02/05/2016 23:59 - United States - Fremont

Today, I got my graded essay from my teacher. Earlier, he'd said that it was "too specific", and that I should change it to be "more general and debatable". Now that I've got it back, the first comments on the paper are, "Your thesis is too general, be more specific." FML
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Same thing different taste

Underfunded and underappreciated

By lrn2spel, teach - This FML is from back in 2013 but it's good stuff - United States - Mogadore

Today, I got back the essay I wrote about how my country's education system is fucked. At one point, I made a spelling mistake. My teacher wrote a note about it, basically calling me illiterate, and telling me to pay attention in school instead of whining about it. She misspelled "school". FML
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Thesis' are incredibly difficult to master.. While your teacher didn't give you great guidance, he did show you the general gist of what you should avoid when writing one - i.e. - being too specific or not specific enough... A thesis balances in between both. Don't discourage yourself though! With practice, I'm sure you'll turn into a pro

There could have been the possibility of making it too general? Ask around for people you trust to check your work next time. Either way, it sucks :/ fyl op.

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give him the first draft again and see what he says

I would go talk to them and ask them to clarify. Take the too-specific essay with you if you still have it.

I'm dealing with the same crap from my boss. It's beyond frustrating. Good luck with future professors though. Hopefully they won't be as confusing.

My teacher is the same way don't worry

I swear teachers do this on purpose just to **** with you

Question here guys - why would you want an essay to be vague? Is the point not to demonstrate your understanding of a given topic, by being as specific as possible?

Theodore764 5

So stupid how teachers do that because it has happened to me before. It seems like they have no idea what they're talking about.