By snappyPi - 28/01/2011 06:21

Today, I wrote a poem and was very proud of it. I showed it to my mom. After reading it, her response was, "What is this shit?" FML
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spikey818 9

you have a nice mom

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FYLDeep 25

Add a little guitar and drums to the background and maybe it won't be so shitty.

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Mierda2k 1

46 u replied to every single person almost. ur so sad n immature. and one he'll of an ugly bird. hiding u buck tooth behind that?

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loshysucks 0

LOL . that made my day. well look, i can reply to everyone here cant i? and i can hide my teeth in this picture cant i? i can do whatever i want and i dont care about anyone's opinion. ok? ok.

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Mierda2k 1

obviously u do care since u felt u had to reply to everyone that made a comment about u. u r probably the most irritating person on here ever. and I know I'm not alone on that comment. so just chill out and delete ya account doing us all a favour buck tooth.

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loshysucks 0

what the actual ****? why are people like that?D: , im not gonna delete my account you dumbass, and you cant make me delete it. i write whatever i want i inslut whoever i want and no one can stop me ok ******?

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MLuckyCapoeirist 6

Nobody can? Try saying " I summon Sirin" and see what happens. -btw I'm staying neutral.

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MLuckyCapoeirist 6

Oh dang, now you can only hope that she won't answer D:

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MLuckyCapoeirist 6

Well, she was banned now, never summon Sirin...ever... :P

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MLuckyCapoeirist 6

Best idea I've ever had....oh god I was supposed to stay neutral! uh oh...

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CkMystic 0

yes, because everyone who writes poetry is emo... Robert Frost, Homer, Shakespeare... please, sir, if you have over-generalized stereotypes that only suffice to make you look like an uneducated idiot, keep them to yourself.

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ImaginaryFoe 0

How old are you, OP? Was this your first poem ever? Was she supposed to frame it? Some things you should know about poetry: Not everyone likes it. Most people aren't good at writing it (it's harder than it seems). Many people don't enjoy reading amateur poetry. If you write it and let people read it, be prepared for criticism. I don't know if your poem sucked or if you just caught your mum at an odd moment but toughen up or quit writing, maybe both in your case.

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Seddah 3

I agree. If you're looking for praise when showing people your poetry, you really should take into account the people you show it to. I wouldn't show my parents anything I've written. They don't care for poetry. Despite taking classes to improve my writing, I still don't feel that I'm much above the amateur level. I love to write, but most people don't love to read poetry. OP, join deviantART. You'll find plenty of people who'll enjoy reading your work. Provided it doesn't suck.

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Driftz 3

Roses are red, violets are blue. Yeah bitch, I made this for you.

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DRIEAM 0

Ydi for being a little emo shit who writes poetry.

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motero 0

the best honest reply you'll ever get

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