By seablue - 11/06/2009 06:12 - United States

Today, I wrote a poem for this guy I am falling for. Before telling him that I wrote it, he read it and then laughed at how "corny and stupid" it was because he would "never date someone who could come up with something that lame." The poem was about how vulnerable he makes me feel. FML
I agree, your life sucks 54 329
You deserved it 16 531

Same thing different taste

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It's cool that you had the guts to gave him a poem you wrote yourself, but you really shouldn't write about how vulnerable someone makes you feel. And they're a little overdone, making them even more corny. Not everyone appreciates poetry though.

ZiggyMorrison 0

most guys dont like poems specially love poems you should have just told him how you felt its not that hard

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Ouch. I have been given poems before. I do think they are corny, but the thought that someone put so much effort to impress me is what makes me smile. It's the symbolism, not the words on the paper. That guy isn't very bright, is he? I'd go for a nerd. Smart is the new sexy. xP

testing_fml 0

Was it an angsty emo poem? If it was, you so deserved that. If not, I can only imagine how heartbreaking that must've been, fyl.

unseenchanges 0

well.. for starters.. he's a dousche bag and you can do better.. i can't stand those types.. he prolly also is the guy that is all.. i hate girls that need to hear that i love her..dumb ass.. will always be alone prolly.. don't listen to these idiots advice in efforts to make you feel like crap either.. the fact of the matter is even if the poem wasn't to him and you just wanted someones support in reading it ... he shouldn't have went there.. the only reason people say those things are because they don't have the balls to be that upfront with their own emotions don't waste your time on guys like that.. they get you nowhere in life except the dark hole they crawled out of

i get not writing something for someone about vulnerability if you're gonna show them, but wtf is with people saying it's weird for girls to write poetry for guys? i feel bad for them. that's pretty ignorant and very rude, in my opinion. keep on writing.

What a douche. It takes guts to do things like that. If you can express yourself that way then keep it up. Everyone needs a healthy outlet.

don't listen to all these assholes what a douche. just forget him, he's better off with lame girls

i totally agree with #194 to express yourself like that requires guts ... and i don't see why girls shouldn't write poems , i'd probably have liked it if i was the guy ...

fyl for being so being born so clueless ydi for writing a guy a poemmmmm