Kind of an @55#013, that guy. He should have at least suspected that you were the author and refrained from obnoxious comment until he knew for sure. There's nothing wrong with falling for someone who's a bit of a jerk; it happens to everyone.

who would tell someone in a poem how vulnerable they feel about them?

I meant -- thoughts that do often lie too deep for tears

Some guys just dont understand... RI

MOST (adding emphasis so i dont get flamed) straight guys i know hate poetry. Try just asking him out

If you're going to do something like that make sure he's a guy who would appreciate that kind of thing, and wouldn't be an asshole. **** his life because he's a piece of shit who can't keep himself from making it known to people even in the most obvious situations.

Awww, what a total jerk @ least you didn't make a fool out of yourself by letting him know you wrote it for him.

Love poems always suck. Like, failure here was absolutely inevitable. You should have written the poem, read it a few times, believed you were the best poet in the whole wide world, then you should have manned up and asked him out. There was no reason for you to show him this poem.

YDI for either: A) Falling for a complete douchebag or B) Not knowing he was a douchebag, thus letting yourself fall for someone you didn't know in the first place. Which means you were probably only attracted to his looks. YDIIIII.

Well, does he have date rape face? This is how you figure this situation out.