By seablue - 11/06/2009 06:12 - United States

Today, I wrote a poem for this guy I am falling for. Before telling him that I wrote it, he read it and then laughed at how "corny and stupid" it was because he would "never date someone who could come up with something that lame." The poem was about how vulnerable he makes me feel. FML
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redbluegreen 40

It's cool that you had the guts to gave him a poem you wrote yourself, but you really shouldn't write about how vulnerable someone makes you feel. And they're a little overdone, making them even more corny. Not everyone appreciates poetry though.

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ZiggyMorrison 0

most guys dont like poems specially love poems you should have just told him how you felt its not that hard

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Dboy23 0

Lol I'm sorry but I found this hilarious, nice #3.

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IphaiLyf 0

GOOD NEWS: You found out what he thought about it before you admitted you wrote it... and sorta embarrassed yourself; assuming that you played it offf BAD NEWS: poetry isnt his thing so you might wanna find a new way of catchin his eye.. if you still want to that is. After what he said.. i'd rather punch him than try again. There are other fishes in the sea. BETTER ONESSSSSSS actually who can appreciate stuff like that. P.S I WANNA READ THE POEMMMMMMMMMMMMMm so post it up please :)

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annamg 0

he didn't have to be a dick about it

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Daenerys_fml 0

I suppose, then, that is a good thing you didn't tell him you wrote it. I wouldn't pursue him any longer, considering he can't appreciate the nice things that people do for him or at least pretend he likes it so as to avoid hurting feelings.

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fml610 0

i wrote a poem about a guy i used to like to and how my feelings for him faded. its okay to write poems its not creepy. its just a way some people express their feelings. if he doesnt like it then... maybe you should find a way to get over it... i mean its not easy but you should cause a guy like that is probably someone you shouldn't go out with. at least you had the guts and creativity to write a poem...its hard for some people to write or think about stuff like that.

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RinaRapture 0

NOOOOO. Guys hate the mushy love stuff. :3 it may've been good, but guys don't fall for those kinds of things. They believe it should work guy-to-girl, not vice-versa. >.^

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zanthrax 0

I would also think twice about starting a relationship with a girl that writes me poems. Especially if she calls herself 'vulnerable' in it.

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bob1124 0

You might want to get with someone who makes you feel better about yourself, idiot.

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Sighwonder 0

it's best not to adore someone that doesn't appreciate true feelings. especially some one that doesn't have a common interest as you do such as poetry.

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o0ginger0o 7

Dear Lord, Why is it that every angst-filled teenager, these days, thinks they're a literary genius? People seem to think they need nothing more than raw emotion to be a poetic prodigy. I want to vomit everytime a girl says she has a passion for writing, then I see a diatribe filled with the "unbridled feelings" she has spewing from every orifice, expressed with spelling and sentence structure that would've caused her to fail the 4th grade, along with language that even a soap opera or **** would call "too cheesy." Please, do yourself a favor and get an unbiased, second opinion from someone who actually has a successful career in the English or writing field.

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