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You opened yourself and he shit on it. If he's like that to a poem, he'd probably care little of your feelings. He's not worth it. Find someone who appreciates you for who you are and not what they want you to be.
Hey, click my name and I'll write a poem for you, for him(no that's not a double negative)
#108, why the hell would that be a double negative? To the OP: Congrats, you're a creeper.
oh irony you're everywhere
Why the hell are you with him if he makes you feel vulnerable?
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It's cool that you had the guts to gave him a poem you wrote yourself, but you really shouldn't write about how vulnerable someone makes you feel. And they're a little overdone, making them even more corny. Not everyone appreciates poetry though.
most guys dont like poems specially love poems you should have just told him how you felt its not that hard