the fact that u know so much about twilight saddens me!

I am so sorry

You should replace every use of the words "my ******/mouth/etc." with "a pencil sharpener".

I've read through most of these comments and I notice everyone saying this person is a terrible dad, or atleast most of them. Sad fact is that I know a mother that would say this or act this way about her daughter, who happens to be the exact same age and writes stories like this. I'm worried.

Can I get her number in two years?

Hey, at least she's putting time and effort into creative writing. Some pretty famous authors got their start writing fanfic (Lois McMaster Bujold, Melanie Rawn, Joanna Russ, Della Van Hise, Margaret Wander Bonanno, Diane Duane, A.C. Crispin...) Encourage her creativity even if the subject matter bugs you. Also, at sixteen, better writing **** than getting in trouble...

ur an asshole for saying that,,,,

Oh get over it! She is one of a million that do that, except most post it on the Internet too. Feel lucky

She counted every word....

FYL, if she's writing horrible fanfics she's probably just as obsessive outside of it. Twilight = the death of good supernatural literature as we know it. As far as those complaining it's her privacy, she's 16 and likely did not pay for the laptop herself. Privacy voided.